<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?><?xml-stylesheet href="http://www.blogger.com/styles/atom.css" type="text/css"?><feed xmlns='http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom' xmlns:openSearch='http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearchrss/1.0/' xmlns:georss='http://www.georss.org/georss' xmlns:gd='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005' xmlns:thr='http://purl.org/syndication/thread/1.0'><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701</id><updated>2011-04-21T19:32:24.792-07:00</updated><title type='text'>yeo sim</title><subtitle type='html'></subtitle><link rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#feed' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/posts/default'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default?max-results=100'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/'/><link rel='hub' href='http://pubsubhubbub.appspot.com/'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><generator version='7.00' uri='http://www.blogger.com'>Blogger</generator><openSearch:totalResults>21</openSearch:totalResults><openSearch:startIndex>1</openSearch:startIndex><openSearch:itemsPerPage>100</openSearch:itemsPerPage><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-113405987325263938</id><published>2005-12-08T08:37:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-12-08T08:37:53.553-08:00</updated><title type='text'>The immigration program of the U.S.</title><content type='html'>GSEww056&lt;br /&gt;Summary Response&lt;br /&gt;News Talk&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The immigration program of the U.S.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In "Vietnam, U.S. agree to resume immigration program", author says the U.S. will again admit vietnamese, since 1994. The U.S. permitted when Vietnamese citizens apply to "the United States under the former Olderly Departure Program" (ODP) (par. 2). As the result, Vietnamese can immigrate in the U.S. nearly 500.000 Vietnamese. Vietnamese who couldn't apply to ODP, because it closed in 1994, can apply new ODP. Former ODP has some problems that Vietnamese who immigrate into the U.S. are controled under ODP before the end of Vietnam War in 1975. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I agree with new immigration program of the U.S. Until now, a large number of illegal immigrators. It is bad both illegal immigrator and the U.S. government. Therefore the new immigration program is help to immigrators. Legal immigrator who pass immigration program, can have help from the government. However it has problem, because it is applicable on a limit scale, only Vietnamese. I think immigration program should be applicable to more various countries' citizens. Many people, both illegal and legal, are immigrating into the U.S. steadily. If this situation will occur the U. S. government should make immigration program that more applicable to diverse citizens. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;Vietnam, U.S. agree to resume immigration program. (2005, Nov. 15). Reuters Limited. Retrived Nov. 16, 2005, from http://today.reuters.com/news/newsarticle.aspx?type=worldNews&amp;storyid=2005-11-15T094307Z_01_RID533911_RTRUKOC_0_US-VIETNAM-USA.xml&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-113405987325263938?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/113405987325263938/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=113405987325263938' title='10 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/113405987325263938'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/113405987325263938'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/12/immigration-program-of-us.html' title='The immigration program of the U.S.'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>10</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-113099443556515756</id><published>2005-11-02T20:01:00.000-08:00</published><updated>2005-11-02T21:07:15.606-08:00</updated><title type='text'>J.LO</title><content type='html'>My hero is J.Lo, Jennifer Lopez. She is singer, actress, and successful business person. She has cloth line, perfume, accessories line, also attractive voice and fantastic body. I like her passion and ability.&lt;br /&gt;She was born in Latin America. She is not white people, although she became one of the famouse and succeful big star. I disliked her for a while, because she kept company with Ben Affleck. However, another side, I respected her ability that finding guys. I prefer charming person to beautiful person. I think J.Lo is not official beautiful face, but her attitudes ,passions, efforts, are made cahrming person. &lt;br /&gt;According to these reasons, I began to like Jennifer Lopez, at the same time she is my hero who I want to be alike her.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-113099443556515756?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/113099443556515756/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=113099443556515756' title='18 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/113099443556515756'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/113099443556515756'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/11/jlo.html' title='J.LO'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>18</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112862787333147912</id><published>2005-10-06T12:43:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-06T12:44:33.340-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Grammar Quiz</title><content type='html'>First, I took modal quiz 1 in &lt;a href="http://www.pacificnet.net/~sperling/quiz/modal1.html"&gt;“ESL Café Quiz page”&lt;/a&gt;. Second, I took present simple quiz in &lt;a href="http://www.collegeem.qc.ca/cemdept/anglais/trivps1.htm"&gt;“ESL Blues Quiz page”&lt;/a&gt; I think first quiz is better than second, because ESL café quiz page is simple and more similar to the computerized TOEFL. The ESL Blues Quiz page was vague, so I couldn’t find easily what I want.     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I took the first quiz on &lt;a href="http://www0.bbc.co.uk/apps/ifl/worldservice/quiznet/quizengine?ContentType=text/html;quiz=1237_In_the_past"&gt;“BBC’s Quiz Page”&lt;/a&gt;. It was interesting when I took the quiz, because pictures supported the questions, so these pictures weren’t boring. However, when I finished the quiz, I didn’t find the answers immediately, so I tried the quiz. The second quiz,&lt;a href="http://www.englishlearner.com/tests/correct.html"&gt;“englishlearner.com”&lt;/a&gt;, was a little  monotonous. However, when I solved one question, I find the answer on the top. I could understand my problem at once, so I preferred the second one.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112862787333147912?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112862787333147912/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112862787333147912' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862787333147912'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862787333147912'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/10/grammar-quiz.html' title='Grammar Quiz'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112862651006949757</id><published>2005-10-06T12:21:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-06T12:26:20.063-07:00</updated><title type='text'>The World Bank</title><content type='html'>Research paper&lt;br /&gt;EAP2ww055&lt;br /&gt;10/06/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Abstract&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This paper argues that the World Bank should manage fairly, and then they should lead fair trade between the poor countries and the rich countries. First, the World Bank should support the poor countries’ field of agriculture. Second, they should take care of the poor countries’ economic condition. Finally, the World Bank should encourage fair trade. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have been concerned about the World Bank since 1998. In 1998, the domestic economy of Korea was difficult, so we requested funds. At that date Koreans spent a hard time; at the same time Koreans also became interested in the role of the IMF and the World Bank. It occurred in my school days; I learned about the effects of IMF and the World Bank on Korea’s economy. Now, we have overcome many difficulties. The role of the World Bank is giving to the poor or distressed countries, and then they recover their debt; however, for the Third World it is difficult to pay their debts. “The poor farmers make up most of the billion of people living on less than a dollar a day” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 4), and the World Bank did wrong in the process of recovering. An example is the World Bank’s forcing to open poor countries’ markets, or prohibiting raising tariffs on poor countries’ agricultural staples. “Too many of farmers have been driven to destitution by the rule and practices that govern agricultural trade” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 4). The World Bank also shapes a policy about developed countries’ debts cancellation; it means that the IMF and World Bank should not impose conditions on poor countries seeking debt relief (Davies, 2005). However, it also causes many problems. Suppose we agree that we should continue to pay taxes (Davies, 2005), or the rich countries should have to undertake debtor’s duties. Nowadays the World Bank commits unfair practices; “the World Bank is perpetuating third stage slavery in developing countries” (Phiri, 2005, par. 1). The World Bank should seek fairness in the situation in three ways. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, the World Bank should support the poor countries in the field of agriculture. Agriculture is one of the major industries in developed countries. The World Bank and the government of developed countries should support their agriculture. The other rich countries have many major industries, but many poor countries have few major industries. For instance, most poor countries give priority to labor; they do not reach a high-tech industry. Therefore their industry depends on basic technology, as in agriculture or manufacture, because they do not have a high-tech or economic stabilization, but the poor countries have a large population. It is the poor countries’ potential power. The poor countries should utilize their labor force, cheap and plentiful labor. The poor countries have factors that make developing agriculture possible. Consequently, the government of poor country and the World Bank should bring up the poor countries’ agriculture. However, the IMF and the World Bank compel the developed countries to import rice, wheat, corn and other staples (Beveridge, 2005). This is unfair. The World Bank should take a neutral attitude between the rich countries and the poor countries; nevertheless, they deceive us with the rich countries. This curtails the fair trade and decreases the morale of the poor countries. For example, Arkansas, in the U.S., earns the largest profits, $123 million (2002-03). They made a profit of 50% of exports to Cuba and Haiti (Financial Express, 2005). The World Bank should persuade rich countries to take in the staples of poor countries. Although the rich countries have many advantages in agriculture, they should import the agricultural products of poor countries. It is a kind of subcontract or specialization. In order to sell the rich countries’ agricultural products, the poor countries should be educated in agricultural technology. At the same time, the World Bank recommends the agricultural technology of rich countries. Although the developing countries’ major industry is agriculture, they do not have high technical skill. The World Bank should encourage technical skill in agriculture. They should teach the method of agricultural technology. For instance, the World Bank asks the rich countries  for help, so the rich countries teach a method of agricultural technology. For example, they should support the introduction of high technique in agriculture, farm appliances or farming machines in the developed countries. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, the World Bank should take care of the poor countries’ economic condition. The poor countries have more disadvantages than rich countries, so the World Bank should think over this point. They should defend tariffs. The IMF and the World Bank should make flexible rules that help the poor countries against the rich countries. For example, they should restrict the opening of their markets, for rice, wheat, corn and other things, and maintain tariffs in poor countries. However, rice is one of the  important crops in the world; two billion people are involved in its trade. The WTO should give help to poor countries that defend their rice tariffs. However, in practice, the rich countries claim it is only because of their profits that they want to cut tariffs (Beveridge, 2005). If it becomes a reality, the poor countries will become more hungry, and poorer, unlike the rich countries. “Under the WTO negotiations, India and China, together home to 820 million rice farmers, are among 13 developing countries that could be forced to slash their rice tariffs” (Beveridge, 2005). And in 1995, the IMF compelled Haiti to reduce their tariffs on rice; as a result, their rice imports doubled (Financial Express, 2005). The rich countries want to reduce tariffs, because of extension of their market for much more money. The rich countries obtain continuous profits from the poor countries; for this reason, the World Bank and WTO should make impartial rules and defend tariffs. With all one of the largest rice exporter is the United State when the rice costs double (Beveridge, 2005). If this situation will continue, the poor countries will never recover their economy. Global Justice Zambia executive director John Phiri said, “We need to protect the interests of the country first before those of the IMF and the World Bank. They are killing us, especially the youth who are dealing with poverty every day,” (Phiri, 2005, par. 12). Moreover “Abruptly lowering tariffs on food in a country where most people are poor farmers is a recipe for disaster” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 11). Therefore the World Bank should manage flexible tariffs. For example, when the poor countries trade with other rich countries, the World Bank charges a high tax against the rich countries. At the same time, they should defend the poor countries’ markets against rich countries’ force. According to Davies (2005, par. 25), “they are likely to be more effectively spent improving poor countries’ international market access.” And the World Bank in cooperation with WTO should open the poor countries’ market by a less aggressive method. Although this is the age of globalization, the market has no frontiers. As a result, people can buy everything, everywhere, at every time. However, most of the rich countries control the world market, because they have high technical skills, abundant employees and a strong power that enables them influence world economy or international economic organizations. “The U.S. manufacturing sector has been pressing the Bush administration and Congress for action, arguing that Chinese goods helped by the undervalued Chinese currency gain an unfair competitive advantage over U. S. – manufactured products” (States News Services, 2005, par. 8). For that reason, they can get the advantageous terms. The World Bank should protect the poor countries’ rights when they sell their goods in the domestic market. The rich countries force the poor countries to import by reason of globalization. The rich countries have many advantages, so they are able to deal their own products more cheaply than the poor countries’ products. If this situation is maintained, the poor countries’ damage will grow bigger. Therefore the World Bank should control when the rich countries’ goods go into the poor countries’ market. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, the World Bank should encourage fair trade. The World Bank should control fairly both poor countries and rich countries. They should teach a high method of trade. Most developed countries do not have the advantage when they trade with other countries, so the World Bank should help the poor countries to economic growth in cooperation with the rich countries. The World Bank and G8 nations, Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, the United Kingdom, the United States and Russia, should teach the way of trade. However, the poor countries do not have enough money to be introduced to rich countries’ high method, so the rich countries provide assistant funds. Korea and the other Asian countries have developed by improved economic form and the practice of the government (Fisher-Thompson, 2005). At the same time, they should be on neutral ground between the poor countries and the rich countries. For instance, now  the World Bank encourages fair trade and its purpose is debt cancellation of the Third World (Davies, 2005). However, it has a problem, that the rich countries have to pay the debt, instead of the Third World. This means that developed countries’ debt is to richer countries’ governments, the World Bank and International Monetary Fund. This aim is under control of G8 leaders, but they aggravate unfair international debts. The aim brings disgrace to the poorest countries. It is not the best way to cancel debts of the poorest countries. Cancellation of Third World debt does not make some changes to policies and attitude of the poorest countries. The World Bank should help developed countries to pay back their debts, because the cancellation of Third World debt does not make some changes to policies and attitude of the poorest countries. If the World Bank cancels developed countries’ debts, they will decrease their volition about repayment. It will cause bad influence to both the World Bank and to debtors. In this way this the World Bank should pay attention to fairness.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think that the role of the World Bank is important. The whole world is closely connected with the economy, but each country’s economic conditions are different. Consequently, the World Bank should mediate continuously between the rich countries and the poor countries. The goal of the World Bank is global poverty reduction, improved living condition and support of developing countries (the World Bank Group, 2005). Therefore the World Bank should help the poor countries and encourage the rich countries to help the poor countries. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Bibliography&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Beveridge, M. (2005, April 15). Fighting bad trade rules, The Calgary Herald (Alberta, Canada). Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Davies, D. (2005, June 30). Should we write off third world debt? The Western Mail. Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Phiri, S. (2005, April 12). Zambia; IMF, World Bank are robbing us, Africa News. Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Fisher-Thompson, J. (2005, April 20). World Bank nominee seeks education on Africa’s need, US Fed News, Retrieved from LexisNexis, Sep. 21, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Financial Express. (2005, April 18). Fair trade rules can lift millions out of poverty, Global News Wire- Asia Africa Intelligence Wire, Retrieved from LexisNexis, Sep. 21, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;State News Service. (2005, April 14). Reforms likely to change International Monetary Fund, U.S. says, State News Service, Retrieved from LexisNexis, Sep. 21, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The World Bank Group. (2005). About us. Retrieved Oct. 03, 2005, from http://web.worldbank.org/WBSITE/EXTERNAL/EXTABOUTUS/0,,pagePK:50004410~piPK:36602~theSitePK:29708,00.html&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112862651006949757?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112862651006949757/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112862651006949757' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862651006949757'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862651006949757'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/10/world-bank.html' title='The World Bank'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112862577080457727</id><published>2005-10-06T12:08:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-06T12:09:30.810-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Globalization and Music</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww055&lt;br /&gt;Practice Final&lt;br /&gt;10/05/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Globalization and Music&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Do you like to listen to music? Which do you prefer, to buy a CD or download a song? I prefer to download a song, because it is cheap, quick and convenient. In my country, we developed the internet industry. So downloading a song is familiar to Korean young people. In my case, first, I watched music programs, such as MTV, and then I searched for my favorite songs by internet. Although it caused a social problem in Korea, between record companies and song downloading users, it promoted CD sales.    &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;It is good that globalization is affecting the music industry by technology and Internet. It gives an opportunity for customers to buy music at low prices. Meanwhile it brings a good chance for music publishers to get gross profit. At the same time, it helps the music industry flourish.&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;First, technology is useful to customers who want to buy music. High-technology and Internet make it possible to get musicians’ music directly (Dolfsma, 2000). It is “new intermediaries who enter the market and offer a mix of new and already known services” (Dolfsma, 2000, par.1). Also it is a possible thing that customers can buy music cheaply and easily.   &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Second, globalization is a help to music publishers. Record companies and music publishers came to earn a lot of money through globalization of music (Dolfsma, 2000). Also “the United States operate on a gross profit margin of thirty to thirty-five percent, whereas overseas this margin can top forty-five percent” (Lanza, 2000, par. 6). &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, globalization of music is making the music industry thrive. “Internet music piracy not only doesn’t hurt legitimate CD sales, it may even boost sales of some types of music” (Sliverstone, 2004, par. 1). In my case, I listened to music by TV or radio, and then I downloaded a song, if I liked it. I listen to a song continuously; after that finally I buy a CD.   &lt;br /&gt;  &lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, globalization through music is a help to customers and music publishers. At the same time, it make the music industry prosper. Therefore customers and record companies should encourage globalization of music.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Dolfsma, W. (2005, May). How will the music industry weather the globalization storm?, First Monday. Retrieved 10-5-05, from http://www.firstmonday.dk/issues/issue5_5/dolfsma &lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Lanza, A. (2000). Globalization and Music, Retrieved 10-05-05, from http://www.wowessays.com/dbase/ab4/ios47.shtml&lt;br /&gt; &lt;br /&gt;Silverstone, S. (2004, June 21). Music downloads: Pirates- or customers?, Working knowledge, Harvard Business school. Retrieved 10-05-05, from http://hbswk.hbs.edu/item.jhtml?id=4206&amp;t=innovation&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112862577080457727?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112862577080457727/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112862577080457727' title='1 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862577080457727'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112862577080457727'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/10/globalization-and-music.html' title='Globalization and Music'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>1</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112776242778111763</id><published>2005-09-26T12:17:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-10-03T12:49:47.823-07:00</updated><title type='text'>The World Bank-Argument Essay</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww055&lt;br /&gt;Argument Essay #2&lt;br /&gt;09/21/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The World Bank&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have been concerned about the World Bank since 1998. In 1998, the domestic economy of Korea was difficult, so we requested funds. At that date Koreans spent a hard time; at the same time Koreans also became interested in the role of the IMF and the World Bank. It occurred in my school days; I learned about the effects of IMF and the World Bank on Korea’s economy. Now, we have overcome many difficulties. The role of the World Bank is giving to the poor or distressed countries, and then they recover their debt; however, the for the Third World it is difficult to pay their debts. “The poor farmers make up most of the billion people living on less than a dollar a day” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 4), and the World Bank did wrong in the process of recovering. An example is the World Bank’s forcing to open poor countries’ markets, or prohibiting raising tariffs on poor countries’ agricultural staples. “Too many of farmers have been driven to destitution by the rule and practices that govern agricultural trade” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 4). The World Bank also shapes a policy about developed countries’ debts cancellation; it means that the IMF and World Bank should not impose conditions on poor countries seeking debt relief (Davies, 2005). However, it also causes many problems. For example, suppose we agree that we should continue to pay taxes (Davies, 2005), or the rich countries should have to undertake debtor’s duties. Nowadays the World Bank commits the unfair trouble, “the World Bank perpetuating third stage slavery in developing countries” (Phiri, 2005, par. 1). The World Bank should seek fairness in the situation in there three ways. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, the World Bank should support the poor countries in the field of agriculture. Agriculture is one of the major industries in developed countries. The World Bank and the government of developed countries should cut back their agriculture.  They should persuade rich countries to take in staples of poor countries. The other rich countries have many major industries, but IMF and the World Bank compel the developed countries to import rice, wheat, corn and other staples (Beveridge, 2005). This is unfair. The World Bank should help developed countries to pay back their debts, because the cancellation of Third World debt does not make some changes to policies and attitude of the poorest countries. If the World Bank cancels developed countries’ debts, they will decrease their volition about repayment. It will cause bad influence to both the World Bank and to debtors. They should recommend the agricultural technology of rich countries. Although the developing countries’ major industry is agriculture, they do not have high technical skill. The World Bank should encourage technical skill in agriculture. They should teach the method of agricultural technology. For instance, the World Bank asks the rich countries  for help, so the rich countries teach a method of agricultural technology. For example, they should support the introduction of high technique in agriculture, farm appliances or farming machines in the developed countries. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, the World Bank should take care of the poor countries’ economic condition. They should defend tariffs. The poor countries have more disadvantage than rich countries, so the World Bank should think over this point. However, it is different in reality. The rich countries want to reduce tariffs, because of extension of their market. If this is the case, the poor countries will never recover their economy. For example, when the poor countries trade with other rich countries, the World Bank charges a high tax against the rich countries. “Abruptly lowering tariffs on food in a country where most people are poor farmers is a recipe for disaster” (Beveridge, 2005, par. 11). They should defend their markets against rich countries’ force. According to Davies (2005, par. 25), “they are likely to be more effectively spent improving poor countries’ international market access.” And the World Bank in cooperation with WTO should open the poor countries’ market by a less aggressive method.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, the World Bank should encourage fair trade. The World Bank should control fairly both poor countries and rich countries. They should teach a high method of trade. Most developed countries do not have the advantage when they trade with other countries, so the World Bank should think over their condition. The World Bank and G8 nations should teach the way of trade. However, the poor countries do not have enough money to be introduced to rich countries’ high method, so the rich countries provide assistant funds. For example, Korea and the other Asian countries have developed by improved economic form and the practice of the government. (Fisher-Thompson, 2005)At the same time, they should be on neutral ground between the poor countries and the rich countries.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think that this problem is very difficult, because these problems have interests in each country. Therefore, the World Bank should mediate continuously between the rich countries and the poor countries. The World Bank’s role is important, because the whole world is closely connected with economy. However each country’s economic conditions are different. Therefore the World Bank should help the poor countries and encourage the rich countries to help the poor countries.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;Beveridge, M. (2005, April 15). Fighting bad trade rules, The Calgary Herald (Alberta, Canada). Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Davies, D. (2005, June 30). Should we write off third world debt? The Western Mail. Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Phiri, S. (2005, April 12). Zambia; IMF, World Bank are robbing us, Africa News. Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Fisher-Thompson, J. (2005, April 20). World Bank nominee seeks education on Africa’s need, US Fed News, Retrieved from LexisNexis, Sep. 21, 2005.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112776242778111763?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112776242778111763/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112776242778111763' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112776242778111763'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112776242778111763'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/09/world-bank-argument-essay.html' title='The World Bank-Argument Essay'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112672702681535976</id><published>2005-09-14T12:42:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-19T14:11:59.370-07:00</updated><title type='text'>The World Bank</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww055&lt;br /&gt;Research Paper Proposal #2&lt;br /&gt;09/13/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The World Bank&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have been concerned about the World Bank since 1998. In 1998, the domestic economy of Korea was difficult, so we requested funds. At that date Koreans spent hard a time; at the same time Koreans also became interested in the role of the IMF and the World Bank. It occurred in my school days; I learned about the effects of IMF and the World Bank on Korea’s economy. Now, we have overcome many difficulties. The role of the World Bank is giving to the poor or distressed countries, and then they recover their debt; however, they did wrong in the process of recovering. An example is the World Bank’s forcing to open poor countries’ markets, or prohibiting raising tariffs on poor countries’ agricultural staples. They cancel developed countries’ debts, but it also causes many problems. For example, suppose we agree that we should continue to pay taxes (Davies, 2005), or the rich countries have to undertake debtor’s duties. Finally, the World Bank should encourage another solution. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I plan on writing that the World Bank should execute fairly. These solutions must be fair to both poor countries and rich countries. First, the World Bank should support the poor countries’ economy, and then they should recover the debts. If the World Bank cancels developed countries’ debts, they will decrease volition about refund. It will cause bad influence to the World Bank, poor countries, and rich countries. Therefore, they should persuade rich countries to take in staples of poor countries, especially their farm products. The rich countries have the ability to control the world trade by themselves. The rich countries should purchase some products, so they should help to change in poor countries’ economic environment. Second, the World Bank should cut down tariffs of the rich countries instead of the poor countries. The poor countries have more disadvantage than rich countries, so the World Bank should think over this point. However, it is different in reality. The rich countries want to reduce tariffs, because of extension of their market. If this is the case, the poor countries will never recover their economy. “Abruptly lowering tariffs on food in a country where most people are poor farmers is a recipe for disaster” (Beveridge, 2005). We have to live together. Third, the World Bank should encourage fair trade. For example, they ask G8 nations for help, so G8 countries teach a method of trade, like teaching a secret method of trade. The World Bank should make circumstances that encourage interdependence between G8 nations and the poor countries. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think that this problem is very difficult, because theses problems have interests in each country. Therefore, the World Bank should mediate continuously between the rich countries and the poor countries.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Beveridge, M. (2005, April 15). Fighting bad trade rules, The Calgary Herald (Alberta, Canada). Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Davies, D. (2005, June 30). Should we write off third world debt? The Western Mail. Retrieved from LexisNexis, August 31, 2005&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112672702681535976?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112672702681535976/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112672702681535976' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112672702681535976'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112672702681535976'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/09/world-bank.html' title='The World Bank'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112664161407045480</id><published>2005-09-13T12:59:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-09-19T14:11:21.820-07:00</updated><title type='text'>A role of the world Bank</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww055&lt;br /&gt;Summary Response#2&lt;br /&gt;09/07/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A Role of the World Bank&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In “Fighting bad trade rules,” Michelle Beveridge says that the World Bank, IMF and WTO should make fair trade rules, because all the world should live well together. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;A campaign was held that demonstrated for the changing of unfair trade rules. It was held by campaigners and people of poor countries. They who are living in poverty live on small money, because of unfair rules about agricultural trade. Therefore IMF and the World Bank should make flexible rules that help the poor countries against the rich countries. For example, they should restrict to open their markets, for rice, wheat, corn and other things, and maintain tariffs about in poor countries. However, it will cause Rice is one of the  important crop in the world, so two billion people are involved in its trade. The WTO should give help to by poor countries that defend their rice tariffs. In addition, rich countries should assist to providing subsidies. The fair trade rule is essential for expelling destitution in the world.   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think The World Bank should help poor countries, because they have to recover debts. If developing countries cannot pay their debts, it will cause other problems. However, the World Bank cannot solve this problem, so they need help from other organizations, such as IMF and WTO.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, they should cut tariffs of rich countries instead of poor counries. The poor countries have more disadvantages than rich countries, so the World Bank should think over this point. The World Bank should obtain WTO and other rich countries’ consent, and should reduce tariff, especially on agricultural staples. And then poor countries can keep economic stabilization. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, they should teach the advanced technology of rich countries. The poor countries depend on agricultural trade. The World Bank should suggest the way to get advance skills in agriculture or trade. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, they should persuade rich countries to take in staples of poor countries. The rich countries have the ability to control trade by themselves. However, nowadays the whole world have to live together, so the rich countries should purchase some products, so they should help to change poor countries’ economic environment. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, the World Bank should manage debts, at the same time, and debtors. Consequently, the World Bank in cooperation with IMF and WTO should assist poor countries and make fair trade rules. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Beveridge, M. (2005, April 15). Fighting bad trade rules, The Calgary Herald (Alberta, Canada). 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The World Bank encourages fair trade and its purpose is debt cancellation of the Third World. However, it has a problem, that the G8 has to pay the debt, instead of the Third World. This means that developed countries debt is to richer countries’ governments, the World Bank and International Monetary Fund. This aim is under control of G8 leaders, but they aggravate unfair international debts. The aim brings disgrace to the poorest countries. It is a best way to cancel debts of the poorest countries. Cancellation of Third World debt does not make some changes to policies and attitude of the poorest countries. The World Bank and G8 leaders should give other advice to the poorest countries that make promotion of international trade access. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I disagree with this article. The World Bank should encourage another solution, because canceling debt will cause some problem when richer countries have to take the responsibility and developed countries fall off their ability.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, the World Bank should just recover the debt, so they should enact rule. When debtors cannot pay their debts, the World Bank can give some disadvantages. For example, when the debtor trade with other countries, the World Bank charge a high tax.    If the World Bank cancels developed countries’ debts, they will decrease volition about refund. It will cause bad influence to both the World Bank and to debtors. This rule should be execute. Therefore the World Bank should be paid back from developed countries.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, the World Bank should encourage fair trade. The World Bank should recover debts from debtors, and they should teach another method. They should teach the method of fair trade. For instance, the World Bank asks G8 nations for help, so G8 countries teach a method of trade. The world Bank should make circumstances that interdependence  between G8 nations and debtor’s countries. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, when the World Bank advances money, they should limit the price. If they return debt, they consider the debtors’ ability. If they do not standardize that loan, it will be dangerous not only for the World Bank but also for debtors. therefore, They should make a rule when they advance money. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, the World Bank should assist the poorest countries so that they can pay their debts. They should give another method instead of cancellation of debts. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;Davies, D. (2005, June 30). Should we write off third world debt? The Western Mail. 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Globalization influences some areas of  international economics, academics and others. The myths of globalization can be divided into two branches. The first notion is that it is new, that it is an innovation. The second notion is that it brings peace, for example the collapse of the Soviet Union. However, it is contradictory. Nowadays globalization gives insecurity, because many kinds of fanatic organizations are revealed. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Globalization has both merits and demerits. We should select beneficially. &lt;br /&gt;We should encourage globalization, because we can get more advantage from it. For instance, we can experience new things or exotic cultures. Today the world is growing smaller. We should live together. Therefore we should receive an education. First, we should learn a foreign language. Next, the government of every country should teach the way of developed communication. Finally, we should trade in greater numbers. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, we should learn a foreign language. For successful globalization, we should know the opinion of others. At this time, language is one of the most important factors. If a language is understood, we would accept globalization easily.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, the government of each country should educate its people in the method of high communication. The world is big, so it is restricted by region. Therefore we should use another way. For example, we should use the internet. It is useful when we contact someone who lives at a distance.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, international trade should be executed. We can not live alone, so we should come in contact with others. We need trade expansion. When we trade with other countries, we can learn superior technique or developed culture.   &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, we should participate in globalization. Consequently, we should receive education for globalization.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Reference:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;a href="http://web.lexis-nexis.com/universe/document?_m=2d9aeee78fb18aacfe00ca0f6f2360b7&amp;_docnum=1&amp;wchp=dGLbVlb-zSkVA&amp;_md5=481b43d3e0559ffca95e232deedf9cb6"&gt; Peters, R. (2005, May 23). Myths of Globalization, Retrieved from LexisNexis, Aug. 23, 2005. p.11A. &lt;/a&gt;&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112542895963410038?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112542895963410038/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112542895963410038' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112542895963410038'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112542895963410038'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/summary-response-myths-of.html' title='Summary Response-Myths of globalization'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318696053040045</id><published>2005-08-04T13:20:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:22:40.536-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Research Paper- Final Draft</title><content type='html'>EAP2 WW054&lt;br /&gt;Research Paper- Final Draft&lt;br /&gt;aug.4,2005&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India's Population and Control&lt;br /&gt;India will have the largest population in the world in the near future. Though population now is the second to China. Long ago Indian government has established family planning, but it did not enforced. It is very different between 'planning' and 'execution'. Some time ago, India's population exceeded one billion. As the result, Indian society has some side effect. Now, India has the world's highest mortality rates. Especially female babies mortality rates high. Therefore the sex ratio imbalance is serious. In 1991, the age group of 0-6 had 927 girls per 1,000 male children.(India doles out cash to fix sex ratio, 2005, para.4.) Almost Indian prefer to son, until now. Because they think that son brings family's honor and money. Also they consider as &lt;br /&gt;only son can run family business. For this reason, the Indians practice that selective abortions. All the area of India, female foeticide is widely held. India's population problems will be solved not only by the Indian government but also by everyone in India. Theses problems caused to change India's society and produce side effect. Indian government should improve family planning by education. At the same time they should be educated women about control of fertility and mortality. Many theorists have posited that rising literacy and exposure to formal education plays an important part in &lt;br /&gt;fertility decline.(Cleland, J. and Hobcraft, J. (1985). Preproductive Change in Developing Countries, Oxford University Press, p.277.) Indian government should be concerned about female babies mortality rates. Because life is important even to a baby. &lt;br /&gt;Indian government should spread education or campaign about advantages of female baby. The Indians have to see a new meaning in daughter. At the same time Indian &lt;br /&gt;2&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;women should be educated. If the literacy of women rate rise, fertility rate turn into decline. At the end, India's population explosion should work out for all Indians. Good family planning and education are useless unless they can be put into effect. All Indians realize a serious problem and participate. The Indians should apply educated information in real life. For example, using condom or way to contraception. India's population explosion menaces human resource, and jeopardize species. So, Indian government and citizens have to prevent before aggravation. &lt;br /&gt;First, India has problem that a population explosion. India has a large population as compared with to land. Though Indian government established a National Family Planning Programme in 1951, India’s population exceeded one billion. (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.1.) Indian government supports this project, but it failed. Therefore some problems occurred. The most recent Indian woman has on the average 3.4 children. (India Sounds Population Growth Alarm, 2005, para. 4.) However Indian government is lazy about drive of strong family planning.  They should improve as soon as possible outdated family planning. Above all they should give education. It is a matter of importance for reduction of fertility rates. Education would support decrease of fertility rates. When the literacy rate rise, population growth rate decrease at Kerala, India. (India Sounds Population Growth Alarm, 2005, para. 33.) Theses education will produce a good result family planning. Indian government should execute firmly this project.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;3&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, although the large population is an issue the bigger problem is high infant mortality. India infant mortality rate, particularly female babies, is the highest in the world. The adverse ratio of 960 female to 1000 males is due to ‘sex preference for sons and prevalent practices of female foeticide and infanticide.’ (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.4.) The sex determination tests and selective abortions are prohibited by Indian government. However the female babies are killed still now. Female foeticide is performed all over the India. Although the spot that female babies are killed is detected by Indian government officials, this crime will be maintain. Because almost Indians believe traditionally that sons bring with a family honor and money. When a son was born, his parents perform a special ceremony and give birth party of son. On the other hand, when female baby was born, keep quiet. They should pay attention to female infant mortality rate. Indian government should spread education that precious of baby and an advantage of daughter. Nowadays Indian girl tennis player creates a sensation. She is the first Indian woman who a higher rank in world tennis rankings. Indian government should implant this prospect that next champion is your daughter. Indian government gives education which advantages of female babies to men and old people. Women too can manage her family business.&lt;br /&gt;Finally, India’s population problems will be solved not only by Indian government but also the Indians. Indian government executed family planning, but it proved to be a complete failure. This problem is not simple. All Indians should participate in the project. It is true that socio-demographic change cannot be brought &lt;br /&gt;4&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;about by the Government alone. (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.12.) If Indian government enacts law that Indian women’s marriage age raise to 21 years to 18, but parents of hers will disobey this law. Because India is less developed country, so her parents exchange their daughter for some rice. (India’s billionth, 2000, para.5.) Also all Indians need their children to work. The problems of birth control and infant mortality rate are hard tasks to almost Indians. However Indian government and Indians have to prevent population explosion before aggravation.&lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, India's population is above one billion, several problems has occured. For example, the high birth rate, the high infant mortality rates, about especially female babies, and bad surroundings. At this point of time, Indian government and the Indians should recognize the serious problems and should be solved it. The fertility and infant mortality are important components in determinig current and future population trends.(Cleland, J. and Hobcraft, J. (1985). Preproductive Change in Developing Countries, Oxford University Press, p.275.) India's population explosion should be resolved by updatable family planning. For example, it persuade Indian women to obtain contraceptive sterilization from private doctors. And it suggests to using condoms to India men. Also Indian government should instruct education which control birth rate. Next, the Indians should pay attention to infant mortality rate, particularly female mortality rate. This problem also should be solved by education. A drastic switch about female baby is necessary, because all Indians attach great importance to son. They think only son has the honor of family. Indian government helps Indian women who can get&lt;br /&gt;5 &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;literacy. Educating women help curb the infant mortality rate. At the end, Indian government should improve family planning and should be diffused steadily educations. Though formal education cannot be achieved rapidly, all Indians should participate progressively government's projects. All Indians have to concentrate constantly on India's population explosion. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;BIBLIOGRAPHY&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;John Cleland and John Hobcraft(1985). Reproductive Change in Developing Countries. New York: Oxford University Press.&lt;br /&gt;Sarin, Ashi R. (2001). India: Population-Control. Women’s International Network News,         27 Issue, p69, 2p&lt;br /&gt;Vatsala. V. (2000). India’s Billionth. Christian Century, Vol.117 Issue 26, p945&lt;br /&gt;India Sounds Population Growth Alarm. (2005). Copyright 2005 China Daily, Retrieved 8/1/05 2:55 PM, From LexisNexis, http://web.lexis-nexis.com/universe/document?_m=4618a8a3ba836128fe08353f3a26bee2&amp;_docnum=28&amp;wchp=dGLbVzz-zSkVA&amp;_md5=1c1fb02c61316e860c1810e6b4358efb&lt;br /&gt;India doles out cash to fix sex ratio. (2005). Copyright 2005 U.P.I. 8/1/05 2:56 PM, From LexisNexis, &lt;br /&gt;http://web.lexisnexis.com/universe/document?_m=4a17edd14be1ee6105b194566222d137&amp;_docnum=43&amp;wchp=dGLbVzz-zSkVA&amp;_md5=da8e5c5db012a5b17f6ffb3d1c2d5f27&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318696053040045?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318696053040045/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318696053040045' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318696053040045'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318696053040045'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/research-paper-final-draft.html' title='Research Paper- Final Draft'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318617016685869</id><published>2005-08-04T13:09:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:09:30.166-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Synthesis Practice</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww054 &lt;br /&gt;07/28/05 &lt;br /&gt;Synthesis Practice &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Crisis of American forests&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Several states of American forests' ecosystems are exposed to the menace of extinction: a disaster of nature, and human actions. A natural storms and human actions impair the States of Ohio, Indiana and Illinois's woodland. The National and State parks were destroyed by the government's preposterous logging permission. Human and economic development launched an attack against the Florida Everglades. I think the government and everyone have to protect natural as soon as possible. We should start a small affair. For example, when we garbage refuse, we keep separately recycling. Or we are restrict to cut down a tree.     &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The risk of extinction threatens the ecosystems of American forests. The States of Ohio, Indiana and Illinois, which have abundant trees, are dangerous, because people built many houses and farms. Moreover, the State of Oregon, which has a lot of different species of plants and animals, is damaged by natural storms and human actions. &lt;br /&gt;(Donovan, 1993, p.42) National and State parks that many Americans trust to provide protection for wildness but actually, they protect historical sights and landmarks. &lt;br /&gt;And the government made a great mistake that they has sanctioned lumbering to lumber companies. For this reason, the ecosystems are destroying. (Grant, 1995, 102) The past, the Florida Everglades have abundant resources, but now situation is different from the past days. Human and economic development attacks large wetland. The former, people make houses and businesses. In the latter case is a delicate matter. Enterprising businesses have results in destruction of nature because of the inflow of foreign animals and plants. (Connor, 1994, 2)&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318617016685869?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318617016685869/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318617016685869' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318617016685869'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318617016685869'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/synthesis-practice.html' title='Synthesis Practice'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318601808964641</id><published>2005-08-04T13:05:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:11:02.750-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Synthesis Quiz</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww054&lt;br /&gt;07/28/05&lt;br /&gt;Synthesis Quiz&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The Crisis of Energy and Solution&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The natural resources are limited. Therefore we should conserve natural resources before they are exhausted. Some people make effort to save their energy and protect environment. The cures for pollution what we should exploit resource of substitution and we have to execute conservation of nature at everyday life. We have to start a trivial matter. For example, when we go to work, take a bus instead of private car. If the Americans stop driving a car, they enable to save a lot of oil. (G.T. Miller, Jr., 1994. Environment: Problems and Solutions, p.78.) And we should plug leaks, and install energy-saving window.&lt;br /&gt;Though invention of fuel-efficient cars is a difficult people won’t welcome.  Because many people think fuel-efficient cars are slow, small, and unsafe. However, several companies take cheerful view of fuel-efficient cars. If these cars come into wide use, its prices will go up. “Electric cars, fuel-efficient, are a help to commuting and short trip.” (G.T. Miller, Jr., 1994. Environment: Problems and Solutions, p.85.)&lt;br /&gt;“2.5 billion barrels of oil a year exploit and 1.5 billion barrels are imported by the U.S.”  A large number of cars and factories cause pollution. People should realize that polluted environment and take measures to meet the situation. (Richardson, J. 1994. Energy News, volume 28, p.17.)&lt;br /&gt;The process of manufacturing solar cells stir up some pollutions, but solar energy is a magnificent substitution. We can make easily a heat or cool room, move everywhere, and operate factories. (T.J. Elliot, 1995, Solar Interests. Volume 2, p.8.)&lt;br /&gt;Finally, some people said,“Changing energy is too expensive and dangerous, ” .(G.T. Carlos, 1995, Automative Industry, p.291.) However, It is very important and essential. So, we have to develop substantial resource.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318601808964641?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318601808964641/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318601808964641' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318601808964641'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318601808964641'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/synthesis-quiz.html' title='Synthesis Quiz'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318463534252341</id><published>2005-08-04T12:43:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:12:04.280-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Research Papers</title><content type='html'>EAP2WW054 &lt;br /&gt;07, 21, 2005 &lt;br /&gt;Research Paper Proposal &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India Population and Control&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some time ago, India’s population exceeded one billion. As the result, it caused some side effects. So, the India government and citizens have to prevent before aggravation. India land area is comparatively small, but India has a great number of people. The India government was one of the first to formulate a National Family Planning Programme in 1951(women's international Network News,2001,para.1.) However the government's policy had failed. India infant mortality rates, particularly female baby, is the highest in the world. Because the Indians prefer to a son who is considered to bring the family honor and money. If the baby is a girl, she often will be killed before birth or later. The adverse ratio of 960 females to 1000males is due to sex preference of sons and prevalent practices of female foeticide and infantocide.(Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.4.) Also, many children succumb to diarrhea, diphtheria, pertussis, tetanus, measles and malnutrition. &lt;br /&gt;India’s population problem will be solves not only by India government but also everyone in India. The India government executed family planning, but it prove to be a complete failure. This problem is not simple. All India citizens participate in the project. &lt;br /&gt;There are three areas relating to this issue that we need to work on to fix this problem. It is true that socio-demographic change cannot be brought about by government alone.(women's International Network News,2001, para.12). India population is above one billion, at this point of time they should recognize the serious problem and should solve it with government and citizens. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my opinion that India has some problems that relate to population. &lt;br /&gt;India population explosion is just superficial problem. The India government has to disclose major problem. India population is essential to work. Children are one method that parents make money. For example, if parents go to work, children work domestic affairs. Or they do farm work with their parents. &lt;br /&gt;The serious problem is a infant mortality rates. India government should take strong measures against infant mortality rates. They pay attention to female infant mortality rates. India government spread education that precious of baby and an advantage of daughter. Life is important even to a female baby. &lt;br /&gt;A harmful effect of India’s population will be solved by both India government and citizens. India is LDC(Less Developed Countries), so it need to affluent work. Therefore they should reduce merely infant mortality rates. India’s government should promote education of contraception. India’s would legislate about female reproductive. &lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, social problems occur as the population increases. So, India government should diffuse education that family planning and India citizens should participate progressively this project.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318463534252341?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318463534252341/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318463534252341' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318463534252341'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318463534252341'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/research-papers.html' title='Research Papers'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318328708286111</id><published>2005-08-04T12:20:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:13:01.220-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Argument Essay</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww054&lt;br /&gt;Argument Essay&lt;br /&gt;07/25/2005&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India’s Population and Control&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Some time ago, India’s population exceeded one billion. As the result, Indian society started changes and it caused some side effects. India’s land area is comparatively small, but India has a great number of people, second to China. Long ago Indian government established family planning, but resulted in failure. Then India birth rate increased steadily and India infant mortality rate, particularly female baby, is the highest in the world. The problems attendant on India’s population explosion have to be solved by Indian government and the Indian. &lt;br /&gt;Though Indian government established a National Family Planning Programme in 1951, India’s population exceeded one billion. (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.1.) Indian government supports this project, but it failed. India has a large population as compared with to land. Therefore some problems occurred. Indian government should improve outdated family planning. After that they should execute firmly.  &lt;br /&gt;Although the large population is an issue the bigger problem is high infant mortality. India infant mortality rate, particularly female baby, is the highest in the world. The adverse ratio of 960 female to 1000 males is due to ‘sex preference for sons and prevalent practices of female foeticide and infanticide.’ (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.4.) Almost all Indians believe traditionally that sons bring with a family honor and money. Consequently, if the baby is a girl, she often will be killed. &lt;br /&gt;Also, many children are in bad surroundings. Many children succumb to diarrhea, diphtheria, pertussis, tetanus, measles, and malnutrition. (India’s billionth, 2000, para. 2.)&lt;br /&gt;Indian government should take strong measures against infant mortality rate. They should pay attention to female infant mortality rate. Indian government should spread education that precious of baby and an advantage of daughter. They give especially men, and old people education which advantages of female babies. &lt;br /&gt;India’s population problems will be solved not only by Indian government but also the Indians. Indian government executed family planning, but it proved to be a complete failure. This problem is not simple. All Indians should participate in the project. It is true that socio-demographic change cannot be brought about by the Government alone. (Women’s International Network News, 2001, para.12.) If Indian government enacts law that Indian women’s marriage age raise to 21 years to 18, but parents of hers will disobey this law. Because India is less developed country, so her parents exchange their daughter for some rice. (India’s billionth, 2000, para.5.) Also all Indians need their children to work. The problems of birth control and infant mortality rate are hard tasks to almost Indians. However Indian government and Indians have to prevent population explosion before aggravation. &lt;br /&gt;According to India’s population is above one billion, several problems occurred. For example, the high birth rate, the high infant mortality rates, about especially female baby, and bad surroundings. At this point of time, Indian government and the Indians should recognize the serious problems and should be solved it. Indian government should be diffused steadily educations that improved family planning and advantages of female baby. The Indians should participate progressively this project. These problems have to be solved continually and positively. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;References:&lt;br /&gt;Sarin, Ashi R. (2001). India: Population-Control. Women’s International Network News, 27 Issue, p69, 2p&lt;br /&gt;Vatsala. V. (2000). India’s Billionth. Christian Century, Vol.117 Issue 26, p945&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318328708286111?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318328708286111/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318328708286111' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318328708286111'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318328708286111'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/argument-essay.html' title='Argument Essay'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318310358577740</id><published>2005-08-04T12:18:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:13:53.533-07:00</updated><title type='text'>Outline</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww054 &lt;br /&gt;Preliminary Outline &lt;br /&gt;July, 25,2005 &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India’s Population and Control&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;1. a) Topic. Introduction &lt;br /&gt;India’s population and control &lt;br /&gt;b) Background information &lt;br /&gt;How many India’s population? &lt;br /&gt;- India’s population now is exceed one billion &lt;br /&gt;What happen in India? &lt;br /&gt;- India has the world’s highest infant mortality rates. &lt;br /&gt;c) Why is this issue important? &lt;br /&gt;India’s society start changes because of a population explosion. This problem has some side effects. &lt;br /&gt;so, India government and citizens have to prevent before aggravation. &lt;br /&gt;d) Thesis 1.2.3. &lt;br /&gt;Though India Family Planning established, India's population exceed one billion. &lt;br /&gt;India infant mortality rates, particularly female babies, is the highest in the world. &lt;br /&gt;India's population problems will be solved not only by the Indian government but also by everyone in India. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;2. a) Main Idea one(from thesis). Topic Sentence One &lt;br /&gt;Though India's Family Planning established, India’s population exceeded one billion. &lt;br /&gt;b) Support &lt;br /&gt;India's land area is comparatively small, but India has explosive population. &lt;br /&gt;c) Give Example. Use article, summarize, paraphrase, quote. The Indian Government was one of the first to formulate a National Family Planning Programme in 1951,(women' international network news,2001,para.1). &lt;br /&gt;This past may, India’s population crossed the 1 billion mark,(India's billionth,2000, para.1). &lt;br /&gt;d) Which article is best used here? &lt;br /&gt;India: population control &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt; e) Your opinion. What do you think about this? &lt;br /&gt;India has population of over one billion, but it is a secondary important. They look at subordinate problems. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;3. a) Main Idea two(from thesis). Topic Sentence Two. &lt;br /&gt;Altough the large population is an issue the bigger problem is high infant mortality. &lt;br /&gt;India infant mortality rates, particularly female babies, is the highest in the world, &lt;br /&gt;b) Support &lt;br /&gt;Indian prefer to son, because they consider that son brings with a family honor and money. If the baby is a girl, she will be killed before birth or later. &lt;br /&gt;c) Give Example. Use article, summarize, paraphrase, quote. The adverse ratio of 960 females to 1000 males is due to sex preference of sons and prevalent practices of female foeticide and infanticide,(women’s international network news,2001,para.4). Many children succumb to diarrhea, diphtheria, diphtheria, pertussis, tetanus, measles and malnutrition.(India's billionth,2000, para.2). &lt;br /&gt;d) Which article is best used here? &lt;br /&gt;India's billionth &lt;br /&gt;e) Your opinion. What do you think about this? &lt;br /&gt;Indian government should take strong measures against infant mortality rates. They should pay attention to female infant mortality rates. In my opinion, Indian government spread education that precious of baby and an advantage of daughter. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;4. a) Main Idea three(from thesis). Topic Sentence Three. India’s population problems will be solved not only Indian government but also everyone in India. &lt;br /&gt;b) Support &lt;br /&gt;Indian government executed family planning, but it prove to be a complete failure. &lt;br /&gt;This problem is not simple. All India citizens participate in the project. &lt;br /&gt;c) Give Example. Use article, summarize, paraphrase, quote. It is true that socio-demographic change cannot be brought about by the Government alone.(women's international network news,2001,para.12). &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;d) Which article is best used here? &lt;br /&gt;India: population control &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;e) Your opinion. What do you think about this? India is LDC(Less Developed Countries), so it need to affluent work. Therefore they should reduce merely infant mortality rates. &lt;br /&gt;indian government should be promote eduation of contraception. India legislate about female reproductive. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;4. Conclusion &lt;br /&gt;a) Restate Thesis &lt;br /&gt;India’s population is above one billion, at this point of time they should recognize the serious problem and should be slove it with government and citizens. &lt;br /&gt;c) Final thoughts. What is the future of this issue? &lt;br /&gt;Social problems occure as population increase. So, India government should diffuse education that family planning and  Indian citizens should participate progressively this project.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318310358577740?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318310358577740/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318310358577740' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318310358577740'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318310358577740'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/outline.html' title='Outline'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112318248815212014</id><published>2005-08-04T12:07:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:16:00.196-07:00</updated><title type='text'>"Color Therapy and Its Effect on Thoughts, Attitude and Health"</title><content type='html'>News Talk&lt;br /&gt;07/29/05&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;This article from, "Color Therapy and Its Effect on Thoughts, Attitude and Health" Color always exists our surrounding and gives some great experiences. We can find easily utilities of color. For example, we can stop when we see red light traffic signal, or we feel calm when we see green pastures, etc. According to author, color helps patients who get a slight illness, feel some misgiving or feel impatient. Color therapists are confident that harmony of color treats patients' body system or organ. Our retina admits three colors which red, green, blue. We recognize various colors by compound of tree colors. Colors influence our mind. For example, blue give calmness, peace of mind, relaxation, but red has opposite influences. In conclusion, the proper way of color is very useful our life. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The reason about I choose this article, I am interesting about color. So, I am preparing for color science graduate school. I think color has mysterious power. In my case, when I upset, I try to wear bright cloth, such as pink or yellow, then, my feel become better good. We can find color everywhere. Like this, color effects our life. If we are good at using color, we will get great advantages.&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112318248815212014?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112318248815212014/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112318248815212014' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318248815212014'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112318248815212014'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/08/color-therapy-and-its-effect-on.html' title='&quot;Color Therapy and Its Effect on Thoughts, Attitude and Health&quot;'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112188732577616988</id><published>2005-07-20T12:20:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-07-20T12:22:05.776-07:00</updated><title type='text'>More Men Seeking Plastic Surgery to 'Freshen' Their Looks, Remain Competitive in the Workplace</title><content type='html'>This article,&lt;a href="http://biz.yahoo.com/prnews/050713/clw041.html?.v=12"&gt; “More Men Seeking Plastic Surgery to ‘Freshen’ Their Looks, Remain Competitive in the Workplace”&lt;/a&gt;, there is a common in spite of different languages. Here is a person who is displeased with a private outward appearance. The person is, not woman, a man. Male cosmetic surgery is increasing for 10 years. For instance, liposuction, eyelid surgery, nose surgery, male breast reduction and hair transplantation. Men undergo for the reasons that self-satisfaction and retain his youthfulness in competitive workplace. There is a simple surgical operation, such as Botox, laser hair removal, chemical peels, micro dermabrasion, etc. Men do not no more cover up a fact which he have an operation. If you(he) want to cosmetic surgery, you will check credible plastic surgeon. Because, false cosmetic surgeon, now and then, operate surgery.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In my opinion, I agree with male cosmetic surgery. Because self-confidence is a important thing during the life. The manner of assurance produces a good result. It is a good that fix the defects of appearance. He is performed an operation after that he will find happiness. It is also good to his mental health. Man who is operated is a courageous person. He admits himself in his weak point and perseveres in his efforts. I set high value on this attitude.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;by yeo sim&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112188732577616988?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112188732577616988/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112188732577616988' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112188732577616988'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112188732577616988'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/07/more-men-seeking-plastic-surgery-to.html' title='More Men Seeking Plastic Surgery to &apos;Freshen&apos; Their Looks, Remain Competitive in the Workplace'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112188671210130614</id><published>2005-07-20T12:10:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-08-04T13:19:39.696-07:00</updated><title type='text'>India’s Billionth</title><content type='html'>EAP2ww054&lt;br /&gt;July, 18, 2005&lt;br /&gt;Summary/Response #2&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India population exceeded one billion. A boy is no problem. But it is change, if baby is a  girl, India infant mortality rate is the highest in the world. India has wide granary, but foodstuffs don’t supply. In addition, Indians have difficulty in getting drinking water of safety. So, Parents trade their daughter for some rice. In such a case, parents cannot to do what daughter will be educated. She help in her parents work and take care of her siblings. When she reached her full growth, she will work factory for her family. However, the young women of today profits than former days.  India has a population of over one billion. However, infant mortality is the highest in UN members. Especially, a girl baby is difficult to survival. In my opinion, India infant mortality rates should control.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;First, India infant mortality rate have to decrease. Because, population is one of principal labor factors. For example, when parents work outside, children keep house for their parents. Children help one another in their housekeeping. In process, they learn social skills.  &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Second, India infant fertility rate have to only stabilize. Infant fertility rate does not decrease. Population is a great asset of nation. Especially, population is the basic production factors for Less Developed country, such as India, &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Third, India parents give birth to children who boy or girl, don’t distinguish. A few people, who live in Asia, think that boy is better than girl, because son subordinate family. However, Public sentiment changes with times. A girl baby also valued. For instance, feticide, infanticide, and others must go. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, India should control infant mortality rate. India infant `mortality rates have to decrease. And, infant fertility rates should stabilize. Finally, baby’s life treat carefully. It is proper that women have a baby. A baby’s life is important even to the girl baby.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;References:&lt;br /&gt;Vatsala.V. (2000). India’s Billionth. Christian Centry, 117Issue, p945,1p&lt;div class="blogger-post-footer"&gt;&lt;img width='1' height='1' src='https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/tracker/14495701-112188671210130614?l=yeosimyoon.blogspot.com' alt='' /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;</content><link rel='replies' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/feeds/112188671210130614/comments/default' title='Post Comments'/><link rel='replies' type='text/html' href='http://www.blogger.com/comment.g?blogID=14495701&amp;postID=112188671210130614' title='0 Comments'/><link rel='edit' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112188671210130614'/><link rel='self' type='application/atom+xml' href='http://www.blogger.com/feeds/14495701/posts/default/112188671210130614'/><link rel='alternate' type='text/html' href='http://yeosimyoon.blogspot.com/2005/07/indias-billionth.html' title='India’s Billionth'/><author><name>yeo sim</name><uri>http://www.blogger.com/profile/01516675796693733872</uri><email>noreply@blogger.com</email><gd:image rel='http://schemas.google.com/g/2005#thumbnail' width='16' height='16' src='http://img2.blogblog.com/img/b16-rounded.gif'/></author><thr:total>0</thr:total></entry><entry><id>tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14495701.post-112137246094302157</id><published>2005-07-14T13:19:00.000-07:00</published><updated>2005-07-20T11:53:53.506-07:00</updated><title type='text'>India: Population Control</title><content type='html'>Yeo Sim &lt;br /&gt;EAP2ww054&lt;br /&gt;Wed. July, 13, 2005&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;India: Population Control&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;According to this article, India population is growing more and more intense, so as soon as possible take a measure. The Indian Government executed a National Family Planning Programme in 1951, but failed. Population has not still decrease. India has many people as compared with to land area. Also, India is famous for the inequality between the men and the women. Because a few persons use condoms, a large number of IUD users are deceptive. A cure for Indian population, first, the government will establish a national population stabilization fund. Second, an illiterate female give an education. Third, minimum age of India women is 21 instead of 18. Finally, new contraception, such as acting injectable and implants, proclaim. Therefore, a population explosion lay down from a strong scheme. I disagree with India government solution. &lt;br /&gt;First, life is important even baby. It is the most basic thing. It is natural for parents to be attentive to their children. Especially, Female foeticide and infanticide are a manifest absurdity. Nothing is so valuable as life.&lt;br /&gt;Second, India parents need to labor force. Because it is importance of children as a part of the family economy in LDCs (Less Development Country). Children are one of method that parents make money. For example, if parents go to work, children work domestic affairs. An elder brother/sister takes care of a younger brother/sister. Or they do farm work with their parents.&lt;br /&gt;Third, if children live a large family, they will learn many things. For example, they practice people skills with their brothers and sisters. Also, younger children are studied a basic knowledge by their elder. It is both interesting and instructive. There are many things in family that cannot be learned from anywhere.  &lt;br /&gt;In conclusion, I disagree with article. Because, life is a treasure. For that reason, India government does not artificial control. Next, children are important labor force. They attend to household duties. It is a help to their parents. Finally, children are able to learn many things in their large family. Therefore India government does not limit population. &lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;References:&lt;br /&gt;Sarin, Ashi R. (2001). India: Population-Control. 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